Art fundamentals

 For this piece would just about get a pass. This is because he uses a few points related to the topic. In addition to this few subject specific terminology is used.

   

For me this would get a merit. This is because some subject specific terminology is used. Furthermore detailed references are made  suggesting a decent amount of knowledge towards the subject.

Zainabs work is a distinction. This is because they show that they have effectively researched the topic and accurately uses terminology.